The Woman On The Mountain

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A sparrow knows blood and bone

Still they fly when wings are broken

When the winters come and gone

A sparrow's nest is barren

Barren like the mountain.

Rest your weary eyes and feet

You've been a mother, father too

Now I lay you down to sleep

Mother, how I love you

And how I love that mountain.

Before you join the ones who've passed

Tell us how to live without you here

I need your steady hands to last

To hear the song you sing so clear

The song of the Mountain.

When another sparrow falls

Shall it go unnoticed?

Lord, won't you help us all?

Like the woman on the mountain

My mother on the mountain.

Give your honest opinions, as always. I wrote this after my my grandma died and I saw my mother grieving. I've edited it quite a bit since then, but it's difficult as my judgement is clouded by emotion.

My family is very deeply routed in Appalachian culture (hillbilly, if you will) and very religious. If you can't tell.

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Posted Nov 23, 2019, 1:32 AM UTC

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