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How much bread have I got?

about ¾ of a loaf

that won’t last me

will you nip out

to the shop

and get me a loaf of bread?

no

why not?

because you don’t need it

I do need it

no you do not

oh you are supposed to help me

not hinder me

you won’t help me

I need bread

I will get some bread tomorrow

you will not eat that bread

the bread that you have got

in 24 hours

I will

you won’t

I will

listen to me

I’ll have a sandwich for lunch

a sandwich with my dinner

a sandwich with the film

and a sandwich before I go to bed

you have got enough for that

I haven’t

you have

you don’t know how much bread I eat

I do

you just told me

look

I’ll have a sandwich for lunch

a sandwich with my dinner

a sandwich with the film

a sandwich before I go to bed

and a sandwich for breakfast

I just told you

you have got enough for that

I would not say that

if I did not mean it

I tell you what

what

if you run out of bread

before I come back tomorrow lunchtime

I will give you a fiver

oh you won’t help me

I will have to go myself then

if you say so

but you don’t need it

I do need it

you are supposed to help me

not hinder me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gc_8_fuNTMI&t=23s

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/e2abao/the_problem_with_society_ducktales_theme_remix/f8uhf2l/?context=3

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Posted Nov 27, 2019, 5:09 AM UTC

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