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Everyone wants to see you set a man free.

Switch the blade and drop the key.

You see, its up to fate who blocks the rails, stops the cars, and breaks the nails.

Save his grace, let him be, if you stopped him why not me?

You know how much you love to be served,

We do them for you is this what we deserved?

Save him now, save him please,

We don’t need another one freed.

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This an awful attempt at a poem I wrote. It will most likely turn into another verse in one of my songs i have written. Please critique and explain how bad it is.

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