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Posted Mar 31, 2020, 10:53 AM UTC · edited

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VolatileMoon•

This is a very interesting commentary on society. I think there could be a little better imagery, but it gets the point across. Using extraterrestrials as a way to provide satire to a corrupt society, and a self reflection of hoping to not fit into that society. Well done.

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