Looking for hardcore critique of my short horror story
Heyo friendos,
Hope all is well. With Rona I have been able to spend some extra time writing. I wrote this short story and am looking for honest hard hitting critiques on it. Please read and tear me a new one. Thanks!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NdZw_Wp3OxVC7S4LDckhzaPVKLWcUnqhkkqxuoSSfuw/edit?usp=drivesdk
Posted May 20, 2020, 8:23 PM UTC
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Hello. I believe it'd be a lot easier to give my opinions with the "comments" feature on Google Docs, if you could enable that. Since, I can highlight certain things and it's easier to see what I'm talking about.