Speck of You

I'm from a coastal city. This poem makes me feel the same way standing on the beach looking out into the ocean does.

This is beautiful!

Thank you!

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It’s funny reading a poem like this, the subject matter, through your, my, own lenses, perspective, and trying to interpret what you were trying to convey all the while my mr. self is saying, “no, no, no that’s not what it means. it relates back to that time or that idea that youuu had.” The paradox, unavoidable bias, and pleasure of being an ego, being one. The wholle poem is powerful. Keep writing!

The imagery you've established here simply blows my mind away, the way you've woven the words, it's simply spectacular. I love it, the way you've described such an abstract topic. :-)

I really like the idea here. I love how you've talked about something so abstract. It is so true how our every single thought or idea holds so much in itself. It's so contrasting at times. You've represented that by imagery and perception which are not so abstract. That creates a link that people can relate to. It's so wonderful how you've talked about the thoughts being so tiny "fit into the head of a pin" yet it holds so many ideas and thoughts and feelings. I didn't fully get what you meant in the end "when our sums are made". Are you talking about the end of life?

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Really enjoyed it. Keep writing