[3120] Missing

I'm especially interested to know if there's a good balance between supernatural scenes and the mundane, where I lose tension, and if the point of the bracelet is clear.

Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HPc_vSZneSuMc0Xa2sFovD3DfNgzeT3zGkfv8nXKMpY/edit?usp=drivesdk

My critiques:

[1209] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/it0exi/1209_suite_62?sort=top

[2183] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/isitgs/comment/g5eyz0k?context=1

Total: 3392