Forevermore
The things we whispered while we made love
After and before
Are silent, forevermore
The pheromones that transpired our pores
When we had our hugs galore
Have now ran out, forevermore
However long our kisses went for
Hereafter from our lips torn
They’ve had their requiem, forevermore
While your eyes were what I looked for
Before sleep, and at dawn’s brightest roar
Are shut and boarded, forevermore
Making you laugh has been what I adored
Giggles, guffaws, cackles and a few snorts
The comedian finishes his set, forevermore
My flaws have annoyed you with a profound vigor
My virtues not enough to reach your shore
A struggle hated; now halted… forevermore
An honest effort to open your door
In form of words to honor our lore
Fails to reach you, forevermore
Forevermore and always and for good and for all
For you this; my heart!, my heart down to its core!
For me, to begin with, the love you had for me as before
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Posted Jan 21, 2021, 10:19 PM UTC
This is beautiful! And very emotional. I am actually going through some relationship issues so this really touched my heart. The last paragraph (stanza? - I’m new to poetry - well since like 20 Years ago in high school ) seems like it could use some tweaking, just to have it flow a bit better. It’s a little confusing to me. But it’s all beautifully written and I can tell you poured your heart onto the page. Well done. 💕
Yeah, I'm going through a breakup so writing and drinking and writing have been some night's solace. Not to sound dramatic, but that's where it's coming from. The last paragraph was meant to sound as if you're reading it and it explodes at the end, á la Willem Dafoe it The Lighthouse where he says "Hark! Hark!". Thank you for your input
Beautiful 💕
I am as well - a breakup hoping to be a makeup 😢 - and I have been writing a lot. Today was my first poem.
Enjoy pouring your thoughts into electronic paper. Let me know when it's out for reading
Oh I just posted. Hopefully it’s not too corny