[1912] The Day of High Sun

Hello! This is a short story about my character Parsley.Some prior knowledge:

-The setting is Louloúdi, a fairy kingdom (or queendom?)
-There are four types of fairies: butterfly, dragonfly, beetle and moth. The butterflies are highest in the hierarchy, then the dragonflies & beetles, although they treat each other with mutual respect. Then you have the moth fairies, who are shunned from society.
-Parsley was born a moth fairy, from a supposedly pure bloodline of butterflies. Incidentally, she's also the crown princess. This complicates things.

Thank you for reading!

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My critique:

[2670] Black Lungs, Infected Mind

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edit: spelling