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Disclaimer: this sub focuses on US and Canadian resume standards. If you are from a different country you are welcome to post, but please indicate where you are applying so we can best help you. Please take a screenshot of your resume (the higher quality the better) and upload here directly or via an image hosting site like imgur.com.

What we are aiming for: a clean, simple, and concise resume that shows off your technical experience, projects, and skills using examples to back your claims up.

FORMATTING:

CONTENT:

  • Each bullet point should start with a past tense action verb (designed, implemented, created, improved, analyzed, built, etc). Check out this list of strong action verbs: https://capd.mit.edu/sites/default/files/jobs/files/resume-action-verbs.pdf
  • Each bullet point should use the STAR (situation, task, action, result) format detailed here: https://www.careereducation.columbia.edu/resources/resumes-impact-creating-strong-bullet-points
  • Tailor your resume for each application so it addresses the job description. Show that you can do the job
  • Add context. Simply listing positions/projects and adding industry buzzwords is not enough - you need to tell hiring managers what you really did and how you utilized technology to solve problems.
  • Differentiate yourself. Just listing job duties will not make your resume different from any other. Tell us about your accomplishments, tangible metrics, and technical victories.
  • Avoid centering your skills around a piece of software if you can. Any idiot can learn how to sketch, extrude, cut, and mate in SolidWorks - but identifying capabilities gaps (a need), creating a preliminary design, and taking it through the rest of the design process is something that fewer people can do, so try to focus on the engineering skills behind it. CAD and other software should be an “oh by the way” if possible.
  • Pro Tip: senior engineers love it if you did hand-calc sanity checks instead of just hitting the RUN button in your FEA package, so do that and mention it at the interview. Seriously,

REMOVE:

  • Objectives/summaries/profiles/personal statements unless you're an experienced engineer
  • All indentation
  • All italics
  • All bolding inside your bullet points
  • Any ALL CAPS
  • Your high school from education
  • Your address, unless
  • ALL coursework, unless they are very specialized like grad electives.
  • Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Publisher
  • References or “references available upon request”
  • So-called “soft skills” - nobody will ever claim they are a bad listener, can’t follow instructions, and struggle to work with others on a resume, so don’t waste your time writing something that will be ignored.
  • “utilize” - 9/10 times that word will be attached to some disgusting Gordian knot of a sentence that says in twenty words what could be said in ten.

Evy Kassirer's Resume Tips: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iMMQCuHFY5ocwAJSrnAIfz5o23CYYsT0EPtlYTaj9Bs/pub

STAR FORMAT: https://www.careereducation.columbia.edu/resources/resumes-impact-creating-strong-bullet-points

STAR Examples:

  • Designed 3 different packaging styles for the product in SolidWorks, created and tested 3 prototypes, and integrated the best packaging design into future product releases
  • Collected data using micrometers to correlate size of kid with flavor intensity, discovering that size actually does matter and suggesting an increase in kid size by at least 10%
  • Implemented kaizen and lean six sigma principles into the assembly line by integrating a kanban chart, successfully identifying 4 hang up spots, and drafting a plan to improve assembly line efficiency
  • Worked with a team of 6 engineers to draft updated safety procedures and protocol, as per OSHA Y14.5, reducing workplace injury by 500% and saving an average of 3 lives per year
  • Led a team of 700 students to design, test, and manufacture an updated and improved suspension system for the FSAE 2017 year, resulting in a decrease in lap time by 5.0 sec in all 5 events
  • Tested suspension geometry in MSC Adams Car and recreated test using prototype components manufactured with a CNC mill and lathe, confirming that reacted loads are below allowable limits

Emily’s (/u/emnm47) resume redline edits:

Emily’s (/u/emnm47) How To Get A Job™ Speech:

Networking is EVERYTHING (or at least a skewed amount) now that apps are online and it's easy to use filters. You must network to have a chance unless you are the top 3% of candidates (those people can toss a resume in and get lots of bites). If you continue to throw applications out there without networking it is highly unlikely you will get picked up. I will get more into networking later BUT here are some steps for How To Get A Job™:

Step 1: Evaluate your desperation level. How much money do you have saved up? Do you have any dependents, loans, rent, debts, food money concerns? Should you get a part time job or file for unemployment while you continue to search?

Step 2: Set a time line. For example "if I haven't accepted a position by Jan 1st, I am changing x y and z." Your time line will rely on your desperation level. Feel free to break it up into tiers as your desperation increases and time line shortens.

Steps 3-7: What you can do to improve (aka the x y and z):

. Edit your resume (hey you’re in the right place!)

. Up your networking game (see below)

. Revamp your LinkedIn profile

. Follow up on previous applications

. Refocus on a different job market, geographic area, or company size if needed

You cannot send off 100 applications online blindly and wait to hear back. You have to use your network of friends, family, ex coworkers, peers, professors, etc. to ask around for openings. While Aunt Lucy might not be an engineer, maybe one of her girlfriends in spin class is. Actually making contact with someone on “the other side” (engineer, manager, hr, hiring manager, etc.) is huge and will get your name in their head. Follow up after every application. You may feel like you are being annoying, but honestly people forget so following up a few times is not a bad thing. It’s so easy now to just send off a resume to a position. A single opening could have 100 applicants, maybe the top 10 get interviews and top 3 get offers. Which is great for those with spectacular resumes - you know the type, interned at SpaceX, build prosthetics for puppies in their spare time, tutors underprivileged kids in STEM on the weekends, all while getting stellar grades - these few people look amazing on paper and get interest all over the board. But only very few people can draw interest from resumes alone. That’s when you need that name recognition and a willingness to actually pull your application and take a look at it. If you can get someone to actually look at it, you have a big advantage.

ON INTERVIEWS: If you're getting interviews but struggling to get offers I suggest talking to someone to try to figure out why this is happening. This is an entirely different subject than paper applications and resumes and following up. You may be missing social cues, struggling with nerves, or having trouble understanding/answering interview questions correctly. Practice resume questions you mind online with a friend or family member. Let me know if you need help.

HANDLING SENSITIVE CONTENT, OR GRAYTOTORO’S SUGGESTIONS TO NOT GET FIRED AND/OR SUED

You’ve finally decided to move on from that job working on the X-02S Strike Wyvern on behalf of the Erusean Air and Space Agency. In your time on this project you supported integration efforts for subsystems enabling this airplane to do things the likes of which would make other nations cower in fear.

But how do you talk about that on your resume without revealing information which would make you persona non grata from a particular industry or the recipient of an expensive-looking letter from a legal firm?

The answer: talk about the technologies behind it without saying the forbidden words. Choose your words very very carefully.*

Instead of saying “I developed C++ software for testing LANTIRN display pod software used on the F-14D Tomcat”**, consider “I developed C++ software for evaluating aircraft subsystems on [some hardware standard]-based test bench” OR “I created a proof-of-concept integrating COTS whatever items into a data recorder” - you shed just enough light on the subject without resorting to a vague “I did some stuff for these guys”. Of course, it goes without saying that you should still use the STAR criteria to flesh it out as necessary.

For a little less silly example, I once worked at a company that made carbon fiber widgets for airplanes. It was very obviously carbon fiber and even an idiot like me could tell, but we couldn't go around revealing our exact layups and procedures. Saying "a new standard process used to form composite parts, reducing lead times by 33% and (whatever other metrics)" would not be revealing anything too much. If they pry deeper, that's when you can say "no".

*Not a lawyer (shh) so I can’t help you if you get into a Tom Clancy situation.

**I didn’t actually do this, it’s an example. Sure would be cool though.

GOT WRITER’S BLOCK LOOKING AT STAR?

Here’s a fun exercise I learned from my last supervisor. At the start of every project, you and/or a task lead likely sat down and established the goals you had to meet, right? Ideally these goals were set up in such a way that you could meet them and solid enough that you had to exert effort to make them happen.

Now that it’s time to write it up on your resume, start thinking back to what you did back then. Obviously you met this goal - bold of you to put a failure on your resume - so look at how you met the goal. Did you deliver all five widgets in the agreed-upon six months? Did they have the ability to complete operations X, Y, and Z? Good!

Here’s the fun part. Did you exceed the goals in any way? If you did, how so? Did your delivered widgets reach the customer in half the time and do twice the operations in half the time? If you can flesh this out, you are in a good place.

Do not worry about writing at length. This is a planning exercise. Just get it all on paper and pick your brain until you think everything is on there. Even if you’re not 100% sure about exceeding a goal, just write it down.

When you are finally satisfied, now start paring it down to meet space & content requirements.

Posted Mar 10, 2021, 11:36 PM UTC · edited

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tijaci•

I second that point on networking. And not just for connections to employers, but also for career advice. I was applying recently, getting some bites and a few interviews, but nothing had lead to a written offer. Then I got in contact with a supervisor from one of my internships to ask for advice on how to get into a certain type of position in my specific city. He gave me lots of pointers and then he gave me the info of someone he used to work with who he knew needed help in my area of interest even though they weren't posting positions. So I emailed him and sent him my resume. A couple meetings with the prospective employer and a strong recommendation from my old supervisor, and now I have the job.

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__Ambition•

How do you network when you have no connections whatsoever? I'm from a rather unknown college and I have no acquaintances in the industry at all.

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tijaci•

Yeah I know it sounds pretty dumb if you don't have anyone to "network" with.

Personally, I used the career services at my university to help me find an internship. At my first internship, I worked with a very helpful engineer who gave me thoughtful advice about my career. And I applied all of my problem-solving ability to the tasks I was given.

When I started looking for a job I asked him for advice on what jobs to pursue to get into a particular field in my city. He ended up giving me contact info for someone who is now my boss.

I contacted my former mentor almost as an after thought. I'd heard everyone emphasizing networking, so I figured I should use what I have, and it certainly worked out for me. If I'd ignored that advice maybe I'd still be job hunting. But yeah, it's not helpful advice if you haven't made any connections yet.

So my advice to make connection is to do an internship. Getting your foot in the door on your first internship could be the hardest step. I did personal projects on my own to make myself distinguishable, and that's what helped me get that first internship that introduced me to a mentor.

Again, I know saying to "network" when you don't have a network is frivolous advice. It's more a reminder, imo, not to forsake the connections you have made. But if you're still in need of making connections, I think you have to distinguish yourself with interesting projects--preferably stuff beyond classroom labs/projects.

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__Ambition•

Thanks. I've made some stuff like Programming language interpreters, Reddit clone and type inference engines, video games etc. I don't have any experience (except for my ongoing Google Summer of code thing, which isn't exactly an internship). But I'm afraid people with experience/referrals will stand out far better than me to the recruiting team :/

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I'm wondering this too.

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SoundIllusions•

Networking is really hard for someone that struggles with social anxiety, doesn't know how to self himself and also has a speech impediment like myself. All of this is easier said than done and actually setting a time to dedicate to resume editing etc. Is difficult when you go to school and work, not counting errands, chores and school work. I have a hard time even getting to the first step and I personally wouldn't use LinkedIn. I've heard terrible things about it.

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emnm47*mod* Mechanical - Experienced•

Of course it is difficult! That's why there are so many people here looking for help. Heck, there is a whole industry devoted to career guidance and head hunting. These are not requirements at all - just sort of what I've learned over the years and I'm trying to pass along the knowledge.

You are definitely free to do whatever you think is best! If you don't want to use LinkedIn, then don't. But if you have difficulty finding a job, and time passes and you find yourself needing help, you gotta reevaluate what you're doing and try something different.

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BasuraCulo•

This! This is what people don't understand (sorry for the intrusion, I know that this post is like 2 months old, but this just struck a major chord with me). Networking may be natural to many, but for the people who are super shy and/or have social anxiety or even a mental health issue, they could be good at their work, but socializing/networking is really tough for them. I'm socially awkward. I cannot keep a conversation going especially if it's not something that I care about. It sucks that networking HAS to be a thing in this world instead of raw skill.

However, I'm not adverse to Linked-In however. I think that it's a great place to snag a job.

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

LinkedIn is amazing :)

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DrBlagueur•

I think it is a good idea to:

  • Contact alumni of your school, they were at your place a few years ago
  • LinkedIn. Really it's powerful, believe me. You can look which is a friend with who. You can look if an alumnus is working at the company you are aiming for, etc.
  • Looking for a way of contact the HR of the company, or the CEO if this is a small company (startup). They are the persons who are managing the recruitment process so it would be a good idea to contact them.
  • I was like you, scared of speaking. Now I can speak in public. Try talking to yourself in front of a mirror. No shame is here, you are alone. Then try talking to a kind person. Then try to talk with a group of friends, like 5-6 persons, etc.
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Life-guard•

Thanks for all the work you do!

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emnm47*mod* Mechanical - Experienced•

Woohoo go team! All feedback is welcome and appreciated (especially my contributions!)

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thistooshallpass8•

What should someone do if their current job responsibilities are not as impressive as given here?
They just do not look realistic to me. I mean what kind of a candidate who has led a team of 700 students will have trouble finding a job?

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TrashButtons•

Can we stop with the two column hate? Its really starting to get on my nerves. I make regular hiring decisions for a 5000+ person firm and a two column resume would catch my attention first, every time. Not only that, but our entire company's standard resume format IS TWO COLUMNS. Not only that, every resume I receive for teaming partners and other firms within our industry is two columns.

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

What company do you work at?

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XBLTricky•

Not only that

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Belal98-•

can someone re-upload the template because i's deleted?

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unpetitefille•

What's wrong with italics? I have no problem taking them off of my resume, I'm just not sure why they are bad

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zeemaster33•

What do I do if I have no experience? I wasn't able to get any internships throughout university so now my resume is barren. Can't get a job because of no experience/poor networking skills and can't develop experience because no one wants to hire me. I know I already wasted ~5 years getting this stupid degree, but I feel like I'm wasting my time. Do I just end up pivoting from engineering altogether at this point? The several hundreds of applications and cover letters I've written in the year since I've graduated haven't really left me in high spirits that this degree will ever pay out.

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throwiaway2021•

I would try to do something else and then work your way up in the company. Like sales, security guard, ramp agent etc, (these type of positions are usually at job fairs). If there are employment agencies offering youth employment government programs in your country then try that (Canada has one for people under age 29). You can try something on the side like tutoring or writing paid content etc.

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PositiveArm•

So appreciated!

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BlightZz•

What should I put under work experience if I have literally none? Looking to see if I can find my first internship, but I am unsure what a good format would be for a student like me.

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

Projects, extracurriculars, volunteer experience.

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aheze•

Any luck? In the same boat currently.

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BlightZz•

I just put in some projects I had made and submitted my resume, I havent had any responses yet but then again I submitted them right after I finished the semester, its only been about 8 days since I put my resume out there.

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aheze•

Got it got it, thanks for replying so fast! I also put in some of my projects. How many places did you submit your resume too?

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BlightZz•

I sent it to one company on my own individually and later sent my resume to my college placement office. They make student resumes available to companies there.

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DrBlagueur•

Okay, thanks! I'll try to remember this tips :)

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OtakuFC•

For the action verb, if it's a job we are currently doing do we still use past tense or change it to present tense? Achieve or Achieved, Assist or Assisted, Design or Designed, Provide or Provided.

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

Always past tense

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OtakuFC•

Ah interesting so even for stuff listed as present on my resume, I should still use past tense action verbs? I've seen mixed things on this so I want to see what others feel.

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

That's my personal opinion.

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agent0range_•

I’ve always heard that more flashy resumes catches the recruiters attention = more likely they will read through your resume. But it seems like it’s the opposite of how things run here. When did the shift happened?

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Luis_McLovin•

Order both positions/projects and bullet points by relevancy to the job you’re interested in OR impressiveness: put your best stuff first!

I thought it was meant to be ordered by date/time ONLY?

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emnm47*mod* Mechanical - Experienced•

Nope! So if you have a current restaurant job but you had an internship with an engineering firm last year, the restaurant shouldn't be listed first - you want your strongest stuff first! The reader will start at the top of the page and work their way down. The lower items have less of a chance of being read, the top stuff has a greater chance. This is true for bullet points too - when a person skims a resume, they are most likely to read the first bullet point from each section, so you want to start with your best stuff first there too!

Does that make sense? Let me know, I'd be happy to discuss with you!

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DrBlagueur•

Do you think it is a good idea to use acronyms? Is it better to write CAD or Computer-aided design? CFD or Computational Finite Dynamics?

For programming languages like VBA or companies like NASA, of course, you would use the acronym. But sometimes there is no convention to tell the way we write something.

What is your opinion, please?

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

CAD and CFD are fine. I personally would use acronyms.

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DrBlagueur•

Okay, thanks!

I will mostly use acronyms unless I am using an uncommon one.

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DrBlagueur•

Pro Tip: senior engineers love it if you did hand-calc sanity checks instead of just hitting the RUN button in your FEA package, so do that and mention it at the interview. Seriously

Is FEA Finite Element Analysis? I am currently learning the Finite-Element Method at school so maybe that's why I don't understand this sentence. Does this sentence mean we need to calculate manually what does the Finite-Element Method software compute?

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rapsforlife647OPMOD•

FEA is finite element analysis, yes.

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