[843] The Ice Guardian Part 1

Hey all,

Thanks for taking the time to have a read of this opening to my first chapter. I haven't written in a long time and I'm trying to re-build the habit now.

Any feedback at all is appreciated; I'm really wondering about the standard of my prose and if I'm creating and interest at this point?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vgmWEyed-lMLp1MjqdEkOJGGCJhIXmTLdzdmuyp54ag/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: Crit 1

Thanks again.