[711] Ocean-based Fantasy

Hello!

Thank you for taking the time to check out my post. I have recently taken up writing again after not being able to for some time. This story is meant to be about a diver who went into Lake Erie and through some portal nonsense ended up on the deck of a ship in a fantasy world.

I recently critiqued Eater of Worlds: Here

If you leave any critiques thank you for you time! Story: Here