Plot hole or am I missing something?

Master and Commander. When we meet him in Port Mahon Stephen is sleeping rough and starving for want of money. He is desperately pleased to take a 30 pound a year surgeon's position and grateful for any square meal. Yet he was bought up in the area (later we learn he is a landowner), is fluent in the language, and has a high-status profession. While waiting to sail Stephen visits to hospital to volunteer his services and to "feel the rasp of saw on bone" once more.

How can he not obtain any advance on funds or why does he have no local friends or contacts (in later books he knows everyone) who could take him in?

I suspect the answer is that this was the first book and there was no reason for POB to think there would be more books, and it is simply the way the character developed later that makes this first depiction so at odds. Or have I missed something (war with Spain may have meant his funds were tied up)?

Posted Jul 26, 2021, 1:56 AM UTC

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withak30•

I assumed he was cash-poor. Owning a shitload of land and a castle a thousand miles away doesn't necessarily help you pay the grocery bill this week.

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[deleted]•

Also, as is made all too clear over the course of the series, Stephen is terrible with money, but far too proud to ask for help.

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arist0geiton•

Doctors are paid by their clients, and his is both poor and dead. He was stringing Maturin along by saying he had money, but he didn't. Maturin may be a spanish noble, but ten percent of the spanish society are nobles. Often that means little more than certain legal rights, not more money. we also see that his mother's family's castle is half a ruin.

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thefrozenkiwi•

This isn't a plot hole, it is an element of Stephen's character development and his backstory. Immediately prior to the events of Master and Commander he had fled Ireland after the failed rising, in a rush in order to avoid informers. As others have said, he did have land but it didn't generate cash flow and it is only later in the series he gains wealth. Hence after his patient died and his estate was unable to pay, he was marooned.

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raperm•

This! Was going to say this very thing.

In addition while he does have land in Spain, it’s not a lot; his castle is described as not even having a complete roof and is more a ruin than a true castle at this stage. He has land and a title but it has no real value. He makes his living as a doctor but his patient has died and he has no way to leave or get a new one.

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rachelv02•

Pardon me, but I checked the chronology and the Irish rebellion was in 1798, whilst Master and Commander opens on the 18th of April 1800. Whilst I'm sure it would've taken a while to travel from Ireland to the Mediterranean (not that travel time is really factored in with PO'B) I felt when I read the novels that Stephen had been bumming around in Spain for a year or so before hopping across to Majorca with his patient, who subsequently died. However I'd have to re-read the first couple of chapters again to be sure.

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Padeencolman•

Mahon is in Mallorca, Majorca or Minorca(not sure which or correct spelling), an island in any event. Stephen is separated from whatever little bit he has on the mainland. It takes a while for a letter to get to anyone that can help, provided there is such a person. Stephen meanwhile is out of money. I think the phrase he uses is “he is separated from his little patrimony.” This may be because of the war or simply because he’s stuck in Mahon. His castle seems to. E a ruin so maybe there’s not much money there. And, spoiler alert, His uncle is evidently the one with all the money. And I’m not sure being a doctor meant wealth back then, and if it did Stephen is still young and maybe not established enough to be making real money yet.

TL;DR I think Stephen is really very poor at the moment, not a plot hole.

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Clay_Pigeon•

Minorca / Menorca is a smaller island near Mallorca / Majorca.

"Menor" is Spanish for minor and "major" is major. Apparently a reference to their respective sizes.

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PCPapist•

I figured it was due to his patient recently dying and possibly due to Mahon being in British hands while most of his funds were in enemy (Spanish) territory. I'm also willing to concede that POB possibly hadn't fully fleshed out Stephen's backstory at that point.

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Adddicus•

He was not brought up in the area. His Spanish roots are in Catalan, and Port Mahon is on the island of Menorca. Steven had come to Port Mahon with the promise of a job (rich patient I believe), but the job fell through, leaving him unemployed with no prospects.

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Beefburger78•

In addition to the correct answers from others i'd like to say that i'm sure he didn't have a castle or loads of cash until his Catalan uncle/God father died and he inherited?

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I could be incorrect though.

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I believe he had the castle, but not the cash. He and Jack lay up there during their escape from France in Post Captain, but Stephen’s godfather isn’t introduced until The Surgeon’s Mate and he doesn’t receive the inheritance until a few books after that.

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HandsomePotRoast•

If you're hunting plot holes in Aubrey/Maturin, you've come to the wrong shop, brother.

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Borkton•

He wasn't from the area. He was from mainland Catalonia. Menorca was a British possession, and had been since 1708. When they take on water later in the book and Stephen goes ashore, he blends in, knows everyone and learns about the Cacafuego. Stephen's contacts later in HMS Surprise are through the Catalonian nationalists and in the first book they would have been working against the British, unlikely to trust someone willing to become a British officer.

His castle is in Spain, as we see in Post-Captain, is a ruin, and he tells Mrs Williams the rents are literal rackrents, as in, he would need to torture the tenants to get them to pay.

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[deleted]•

Having a castle doesn't make you rich, necessarily. If land doesn't produce anything then it can actually be a burden more than a boon.

Also, keep in mind this is before Stephen inherits the vast wealth, and also before he is really an intel agent (if one at all). He doesn't get paid for that anyways, remember.

Also, it was significantly harder to "pull out" money from a bank back then, and with the war, and the relative isolation of Mahon you have a larger problem.

It's also part of stephens characters, he just doesn't care or think about money and it makes sense he would just go off with this patient (who is now dead) without thinking about future funds.

The ability to subsist on credit is likely the only reason he didn't starve!

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olagorie•

You obviously haven’t heard of the PayPal blackout in 1800? It took them a while to sort it out.

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Blackletterdragon•

To European ears, "Castles in Spain/Chateaux en Espagne" is the equivalent of the English expression "Castles in the Air". It's like fairy-tale riches or leprechaun's gold. O'Brian is making a little joke, even though the aforesaid castle is real.

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mudpilotOP•

That’s really interesting, thanks.

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Wea_boo_Jones•

How can he not obtain any advance on funds or why does he have no local friends or contacts

From who?

(in later books he knows everyone) who could take him in?

Well... that's several years down the line.

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