Haikus

I love this! A very humoring haiku :). It’s nice to have a comedic poem every once in a while and this one really put a smile on my face!

Awesome work!

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Oh my God, perfect! Hahahahaha I love it I’ve never tried to write a haiku because I’ve always feared I wouldn’t know what to do with so little space as you well put. This is a very fun(ny) way to describe that fear of mine. Thanks!

Haikus.. the original tweets. This is just funny. Using the format as it's own mechanism to make fun of it, absolutely savage.

This is probably one of the best poems that I have read in a long time. I would call this more of a senryu than a haiku, although I think you titled it right because it grabbed me and with the structure I knew it was a haiku. But, because it didn’t center around nature (but around Human nature, it distinguished between the haiku and the senryu). This was brilliant. Great job!