[2935] Rest, Love, Life - NSFW

This is the fifth of five parts to a story about a young, straight executive who signs up for a night of pain and sexual humiliation. The sex is very explicit. It can be read stand alone, but not as well as parts 1-4. I've included a couple of excerpts from part one that introduce the woman in this piece. She appears in parts 2-4 in almost exactly the same way.

This part of my story is quite different from the first 4. It has lots of romance in it and almost no BDSM. It is based on a fantasy, and I was quite surprised to find it take this turn.

I'm interested in any reactions, positive or negative, but I'm especially interested in two things.

1. Does the language help or hurt the story? As I said, it is based on a fantasy and fantasies (at least mine) don't have narrators. The plot is what it is, but I spent a lot of time coming up with language to narrate it.

2. Do those of you who are familiar with erotica know of any other stories that are like this mix of masochism and normal life?

Here is the introduction to the female character taken from Part 1.

The unseen person behind him set a silver tray on the floor on his right. It contained two stacks of small towels, one stack moist, the other dry, and a flat silver bowl in the middle. The unseen person was actually a woman in a transparent white dress. Without turning around, and he didn't dare, all he could see were her thighs as she sat on her heels next to him. And her hands as she washed and dried his right hand. Her fingers were slender and long, like his, but, of course much smaller. Her pale skin made his tan look even darker. This is not what I'm here for. He shifted his gaze to the three tables in the distance. The used towels went in the silver bowl. “Would you spread your knees a bit, sir?” She asked. He did that and she washed and dried his genitals and the tops of his thighs. Then she picked up the tray and disappeared behind him.

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Preceding parts of the story

Part 1 - The Beginning

Part 2 - Invasion

Part 3 - Bondage

Part 4 - Punishment