[2019] Wails in the Night Chapter 3

This chapter is mainly told from Cousin Elizabeth’s POV, though I change to Agatha’s POV toward the end of the chapter. I included descriptions of the inside of Elizabeth’s home, and Agatha has a conversation with her Aunt Eleanor, after Agatha burns her fingers in a mysterious manner.

At the end of the chapter, Agatha slips out after everyone is asleep, to explore the forest on her own, even though Elizabeth has warned her that the woods are dangerous.

Nothing exciting happens in this chapter, it’s mainly description and dialogue. Hopefully it’s not boring.

Critique

[2'201] Silence in the Sands

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p31jca/2435_partial_chapter_1_silence_in_the_sands_ver_2/h8z1hbf?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hEWrWsRCJcmFx0n5e2togKaHHT70AXkj42LVKlDzhIY/edit#heading=h.lvctll1uho9i