[1422] Wishes from God's mouth v10ish

Yoinks Scoob.

I made the mistake of submitting my amateur bullshit for publication, and the feedback was at least personal. So I'm open to any thoughts obviously, but I'd be especially interested to hear if you thought:

The inner journey of the characters was OKish.

The plot was not too predictable.

The main character has enough agency/ is active enough.

link: V 10ish with comments

IDK yall tear me up.

Crit:2900ish

edit: 1499 words, my B y'all.