[3737] A Delirious Line of Conversation and Two Physical Encounters

Good morning. This is the first half of a short story called A Delirious Line of Conversation and Two Physical Encounters.

[Google Doc] (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gq3edZRNpB0TirYYM-HH2w9NJXXMebDKjfUGMuBzKNo/edit?usp=sharing) - View-Only

I'm chiefly seeking overall critiques. It's a long submission, so I'd like to know if you make it to the end and if you have any interest in reading more. If not, what would interest you?

Otherwise, please tell me what's rough, what gets in the way of telling the story. Tell me if something sparks a feeling or if something kills a feeling.

Line edits are also good.

<3

The cash: [4064] (https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/p6hly2/4064_mirror_in_the_dark/h9w0g2u/?context=3), a beautiful story.