[1090] Battling Depression

This is part of a longer story; it’s a portion of the first chapter, and it’s mainly a conversation between a married couple, Dan and Molly, and Molly’s thoughts as she tries to overcome her depression after her miscarriage.

I’m most interested in the following:

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1. Did you think that Molly’s depression was accurately described?
2. Was the dialogue too ‘on the nose’?
3. Was there too much ‘telling’?
4. Which sentences did you think were the most compelling? Were there any that you thought were ‘cringy’?

[1162] Flood of Satisfaction critique

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qbyr9m/comment/hhfzti8/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

[1090] Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10ZEWmiuwgYD7bqYzQBDHbWGuc5dxOeGOU6mC7dnNdb8/edit?usp=sharing