[2187] Team Jovian

Hi all, been like...6 years since I've put something in here. This is a chapter open, meeting entirely new characters, though not the open of the entire story/novel. I don't have much to say, just interested to see what feedback I get on it.

If there's one thing to consider as you read, I find that I get too caught up in getting from point A to B, and don't stop to smell the flowers. If there's points in there where you would have appreciated some of that, let me know. Other than that, did you like it, would you read more?

Thanks

Doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yj92mS8NAihf0VG9xLXy1m62dMZGaV4TbxRO_iMFrRo/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

[1660] Mousetrap https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qdfe1o/comment/hhq3xxa/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

[838] Prologue-Ethereal Legacy https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qdoovf/comment/hho454p/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

[1090] Battling Depression https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qchkk6/comment/hhnloxp/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3