[953] Brackish Water

Hi all,

STORY

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bHK83jHtSFF7hXbERz3DqpNtIBFFYgfjfSX0MJh0i6Y/edit

CRITIQUE (2870)

https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/ql27nc/2870_hotel_boil/hj0fd4d/

Thanks in advance!