[1110] Vampire Story (working title) REPOST

Reposting bc my previous post was falsely marked as leeched. I have permission from mods to repost this.

Here is a link to my critique

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qsqrqz/2530_tears_and_claws_chapter_1/hkiasly/?context=3

Original post:

This is the first 2 chapters of the 36k words I have thus far. If it needs to be said, the 2 new kids discussed are [gasp] vampires. This is also my first draft I'm writing for the first novel I'm seriously invested in.

Things I mainly hope to know:

Does the beginning hook you enough to want to read further?

Are the character expositions engaging or dull?

This is my first time sharing my work outside of friends, so I look forward to crying lol.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11SH9ETkX3LVHQCMGmkWKiobogwdMHaLBqqrkRBq39Gw/edit#