[761] A Ghostly Sonata chapter 1a

This is the first part of chapter one. Told from Jerome's POV. Mostly dialogue. Ghost and Jerome are both keeping secrets.

Story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rbASVA11AfN_4Bq25fnmfQiLKCsH26_KTZgkDKGEYYM/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critiques

[452] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qve3xo/1130_the_baby_as_recorded_by_oscara_haldo/hmjvugx?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

[847] https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/qu6c6i/1352_how_things_catch_fire_beginning/hlbdwmn?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3