[1794] Folklore

Hey everyone,

Here's a slightly extended version of the horror story I did for RDR's Halloween contest. I haven't been writing much lately, or as active on this sub as I'd like to be, and I'm hoping some feedback will get me back into the groove. I'm not looking for anything in particular, just whatever you think about the piece.

Critiques I've done recently:

[1083] Holiday

[2048] With Great Power

[1250] The Great Year