[2548] With Great Power
This story is set on Mars three hundred years from now. It follows the son of the Martian President starting with the day before robe day, when Martians are divided into different robes dependant on the algorithms assessment of their ideal placement to better society.
Open to anything - Crit is for Chapter 1
Also, new title because I like to change them as often as I do my socks. Once a week
for future users - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yl9C2s5vcLXwR-882HSb_jf9POe8jgt_/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=117037944927823283242&rtpof=true&sd=true
Posted Oct 12, 2021, 8:57 PM UTC · edited
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