[1838] Cattle

I'm not looking for line edits unless there is something obviously horrible. What I'm curious about is if the story actually makes sense. I feel like I may have gone too far with it and lost the thread that made it at least entertaining to read.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gvDWm1eaJ9LBU7TXc0v8moLfkDo2ts9EVKfkutAVkfI/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

• [1000] The Sleeper Threshold
• [606] Luminior, City of the Sun, Last Bastion of the Light
• [449] Moa Hunt movie synopsis
• [1543] One nice evening before the world explodes