[1474] Sustainable Communities

Hey, RDR. I have an older crit that's about to expire, and while I'd ideally wanted to post something new, the story I have in mind is going to need a little more time. So in the meantime, here's my entry from the Halloween contest, just for fun. Maybe I should have expanded it by 500 words or so first, but I figured I'd just post the contest version unchanged and see what happens.

Tagline: a man and a hill revolt against modernity.

All feedback is appreciated as always.

Submisssion: Here

Crit:

[2371] The Dragon and the Doors, Chapter 1