[3126]Untitled Fantasy Heist Story

This is the first chapter of a heist story taking place in a magical fantasy setting. I see this as a bit of an introduction to most of the main characters and the core concept of how they tend to operate. This was once posted on r/fantasywriters, but it's been changed a little and I'd love to get a fresh look at it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GIoVr5gUK9E7Aq2SP_o5dbu0yoPGL8iCGcuW1PNT-eM/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

2500 - The Hole

969 - The Perfect Gift