[969] The Perfect Gift

Hello,

This is a quick short story I wrote for a holiday themed contest. Let me know any thoughts you have on it, don't hold back!

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gzk0ZXr1xMYnfqJ7-98le-jmbws_Vfl_ZuKi0YMjYoY/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques: [482] + [278] + [348] from my last post

Happy holidays!