Somehow I was listening to Jimmy Buffett, but yeah. Putting down my cheeseburger in paradise real quick, let me say this:

>If you are going to rage, rage against propriety and inauthenticity. Rage against those who dare to tell you what to do and who to ignore and who listen to. Rage against dividers in chief who claim to be uniters. Rage against those cambridge analytica Brexit tory asshates who pit us against our allies instead of seeking opportunities to commiserate, regroup, and figure out who *really* is keeping us off our Nelly Florida Georgia Line Beach in BFE. It rarely is who they say it is. "They" being a diverse assembly of the inauthentic gathered in service of an evil crown and its world consuming jewels.

I enjoyed this poem, reminiscent of RATM lyrics and message.

I actually imagined bart simpson writing this as one of the opening gags they do. I do like that you don't finish the last line like someone is currently writing on the chalkboard. Keep up the great work.

I feel like this is something Bart Simpson would write on the episode beginning lol.

The simplicity of this is truly beautiful

Hey, I think there's something wrong with your post, it just sort of cuts o-

Very creative use of repetition. Cutting off the poem like that definitely sends a message. Cheers!


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It's never too late to unassimilate.

It's never too late to unassimilate.

It's never too late to unassimilate.

It's never too late to unassimilate.

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