[1383] The Writer's a Whore

Hi all, this is a piece I'm writing up for my Creative Writing course. I'm not comfortable writing short stories, and I wanted to run this by you all first.

This is a rough draft, so I'm more concerned with general impressions, and not necessarily the prose or diction.

Some thing I'll ask you to focus on:

• What do you wish was explored further?
• Do you wish you knew more about the characters? Less? Do you know enough?
• Did you pick up on the idea while reading?

The link can be found here.

Thanks in advance :)

Critique can be found here.