[1483] Courage, part 3, Revised.

Hi all,

I've been making a lot of revisions to this story. A lot of the revisions were based on suggestions people made here.

I'm on mobile. Please let me know if there are any problems with my links, etc.

Since this is part 3, I don’t expect everyone to go back and read parts 1 and 2. So basically in part one these 3 guys went to buy drugs at this seedy apartment building. While there they meet a sex worker named Roxanne who flirts with them all.

Back at their place, the two older guys (Dave and Paul) end up arguing about how equal the drugs were cut and this escalates to a game of Russian Roulette which the younger one (Jeremy) is forced to participate in.

Well now it's been a few days and Roxanne is coming over.

My work: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RxYupkA7EGcVpBWkI2pYoOrpYiYByP7opOcUJXR8LZ8/edit?usp=sharing

In my opinion, all feedback is good feedback. And I can take harsh critiques. So if this sucks don't be afraid to tell me. Thanks in advance.

My latest Crit (this critique is in two parts, this is just the link to the first part, second part is a reply to this part, easy to find.)
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/t0f5gb/comment/hybwlyb/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

Cheers, V.