Love you from a thousand miles away

I love the simple language that have been used here! You have described this situation so nicely and simply in a way I wish I were able to. I liked the first half a lot and I love the message of the poem, it talks about a very relatable feeling a lot of us feel in our relationships and what we have grown to expect out of love. If i could make a few comments it would be about the rhyming scheme in the second half, I love the rhyming so much, a part of me wishes it went throughout the poem, also a few lines at the end seem a little off maybe something to do with how the lines were structured and maybe a few missing letters. all in all though its a really solid poem with a message that will resonate with a lot of people, thank you so much for sharing! :))

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A good and heartfelt poem. Only thing I’ll say is that the rhyme scheme used in the first half of the poem would’ve been great to keep into the second half to keep the flow consistent.