Our Names
You just wouldn’t understand
Unstable ground is where you stand
I overthought every words that came out
But what I heard was not what you thought
Your riddles left me confused
Simplicity and you don’t stand together
Your anger is impossible to defuse
Peace and you don’t belong together
Where were all those years we outlived?
What you want is always what you see fit
When was the last time your eyes sense guilt?
Why have small mistakes always got us twisted?
Do our names even belong in the same sentence?
Bound by the word “love” in the middle
Or are our names just a pair in a twisted allegory?
United and separated just to leave an example
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/th5c1g/the_chasm/i17rjw1/?context=3
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/thrs6c/the_shed/i19mzci/?context=3
This is my first ever post here, any kind of feedback is very welcome as I want to keep improving (grammar, diction, metaphor, etc.) Thank you!
Fyi English isn't my first language
Posted Mar 19, 2022, 11:37 AM UTC