Return to sender
Moving from place to place
Waiting for life to render
Wanting to see your face
Just trying to return to sender
Posted Mar 22, 2022, 11:43 AM UTC
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The idea of return to sender, gives me the impression of someone who you can finally relax and be yourself around
And longing to have the time with that special person again, whilst your life renders, to help you get through it together
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I love the second verse in a way that makes me think of playing minecraft with my childhood buddies. The worlds sometimes took like up to 5 minutes to fully render and until that happens you cannot see and explore the beauty of the creator. Through this the second verse connects with the fourth verse, in that you are telling the world to return you to your creator in heaven. I assume I am misinterpreting but I am thankful that you gave me the opportunity to think about returning to my God in heaven. I am also now realizing that the third verse connects really well with my interpretation in that I am yearning to lay eyes on my Father in heaven. 🙌🙌
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that is a very interesting interpretation, i like that point of view
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I really like this. The fact that it’s so small gives it a special charm, like you’ve got almost nothing to say, but it still conveys so much, like the boredom of one’s life and the urge to see a loved one.