Your work brings me this feeling of sadness I can't exactly place.
Almost wishful


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When’s the last time I felt like this?

Damaged product, Who builds like this?

No way my cards are dealt like this

She spills it and I melt like this

&amp;#x200B;

Really thought my love had died

Five months really just gone by

Hit me up, but with a lie

Still innocent, it's not mine

&amp;#x200B;

Like my bug, ready to abort it

Ask for a hug, but can’t afford it

Tell me the sad news, still excited

Light up to get high, I’m delighted

&amp;#x200B;

[Num 1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/tdoywi/pageant/i0zdlgd/?utm_source=reddit&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)

[Num 2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/tdqvlo/im_a_storm_eyed_gal/i0zf0n9/?utm_source=reddit&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)

Not Mine