First time I'm sharing my poetry with anyone

Goodnight mom, I say as I fall asleep. Just to dream the strangest dream of all. I awoke to find I didn't know my face. I looked in the mirror to see a strange man His breath was weak and he looked so weary His skin was worn like an ancient parchment
Strands of hair as dull as a winters day Yet his smile was friendly with a twinkle in his eye. His face so familiar but I can't seem to place it I run to find my mother and tell her what I'd seen. To tell her I dreamt last night that I was old I looked for my mother but she was gone. I stood in the corridor and looked down at my crooked hands. I dreamt just last night that I was a child.

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