Our Last Date

I sipped my beer

and smiled at you.

You half-smiled back.

You were on your phone

underneath the table

at low brightness.

.

It still lit up your face

and made your eyes sparkle.

you looked beautiful.

.

If I told you that I loved you,

you would have left. So,

in vain, I said nothing.

I haven’t seen you since.

Based on a real personal experience. Hopefully that is conveyed. Would appreciate a critical view of the structure and flow - it reads a little clunky to me. Thanks :)

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