Lovely. Has a spiritual vibe to it I think, like the warmth from something faint but present.

I like the detail of this poem it gives very warm vibes. Keep up the good work, this one really made me feel something


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I enjoy the idea of a distant sort of hope in the background that you always see, but never really try to go towards sometimes; however, once you finally approach that distant hope, it's a nice warm feeling. Your last stanza describing the feeling of the warmth is very nice, but I am not sure when it comes to the "As if (blank)" parts. It feels off to say "As if touches" without anything in between "if" and "touches." Other than that, love the piece overall.  


Peace.

Though the flame is faint and distant,

and what I always see are just tiny sparks,

Sometimes I walk right by it.

&amp;#x200B;

Sometimes, I sit down and feel its warmth.

&amp;#x200B;

Like getting covered with the softest blanket

Comfort sinks through my skin,

and the strangest thing,

One I've never seen,

happens.

&amp;#x200B;

As if touches my cold hand

As if caresses my lost face

As if brings me home

&amp;#x200B;

Peace.

&amp;#x200B;

&amp;#x200B;

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A Quiet Time