Running
Another sleepless night
Most days a sleepless fight
Mostly spent wondering what and why
future I imagined so out of sight may aswell be behind me
Cooped up with thoughts surrounding try find me
now suckers
another runner from another mother
Left with more sleepless nights than you could imagine
Remember when he’d fog up a window and draw a pattern
Man what happened
Thoughts so far away in the past they may aswell be the present
Living in a time machine but it’s stuck in my head
No room for two thoughts sharing the bed again
man what happened
So stuck in these patterns
It’s maddening
Man what happened
If I could run away I would but id still end up running back faster
Posted Apr 25, 2022, 3:59 PM UTC
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