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i love this poem. it’s short, but sweet and powerful. i especially love the line “say the things we left i spoken.” it reminds me of the sappho quote “what cannot be said shall be wept.” well done.

Short but sweet poems that still manage connect with the reader are top tier to me 
Made me think of my first love even if that isn’t a “good thing”😂
Great job

I relate to you poem OP. Under the night sky I have always felt people are more honest. So yes, let's talk- say the things that were left unspoken. Well done op very short and sweet.

Really really good. Ngl. Kurz und knackig but beautiful.

This is a cute romantic little poem. I love the stars and stargazing so I really enjoyed this poem.

 It's the perfect activity to do with a lover. Good idea turning it into a poem.

Fave line:  perhaps not yet, but the day is near

This poem reads a little simply but I think that’s what can make it universally felt. Anyone who has ever loved can convey these feelings and those that lost it even more so. This can be the perspective of Someone who is in love or hurting from loss of it.

Can we watch the stars all night?  
And talk until the first daylight?  
Say the things we've left unspoken?  
Fix our hearts which were so broken?  
Perhaps not yet, but the day is near  
And one day, soon, it will be here

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