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this brings a feeling of togetherness in me! i agree with the sentiments of this poem, eager to read more!

This poem was so elegantly put. I struggle with capturing words like a hollow less net swiping at butterflies. I struggle with being in the moment with people because emotions can sway your perceptions so much but I guess being in the moment is riding out the waves they come or clouds as they darken the sky. Your poem gave me something to think about thank you.

Love it! The subject of what home is is always interesting to read about and try to interpret because we all have different experiences of home.

Some ask the question

When I walk alone

Where is home?

I reply It's here and now,

Present in life all around,

Taking time to listen and see,

That we grow our roots as we move to be,

With each day is a new door,

To explore ourselves, and others more,

So home is not where I was given life from birth,

But here and now standing in peace and with others on this Earth,

Respecting each other's worth

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