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Thanks a lot! Each word with the capital letter was supposed to be a new line, but I messed up the formatting in the Reddit editor. I am new to the platform and learning slowly. Thanks for the kind words. I am glad you liked the poem!

I like this poem a lot. I was wondering is there a reason that certain words are capitalized because I find it to be abrupt like it’s putting to much pressure on the singular word making the line lose its effect. One thing I really like is the questioning parts like “ I bet it bothers you” this is really good I also think you could add more to help bring the idea of the poem to life. Other then that I really enjoyed reading it!!

A beautiful poem. You've written with all your heart. You're a natural my friend! Im not good with feedback so I hope my compliments can meet your standards aha. You're so bloody descriptive and I love it. I can feel each bit of emotion latest out in your writing. You should be hella proud of yourself. Once again, an amazing poem.

I can feel this poem, being so relatable and easy to connect to. 
I like the way you choose words, metaphors. 
Also i like that it’s not like traditional poems with strict rhyme and length of each line. 
Sorry if my feedback isn’t enough, i’m still new to the whole poetry thing.

Days

Days pass like a
Hastily put bed-sheet
The struggle at the corners
A makeshift solution

Recurring and mundane
Yet extempore every time
No one to reprimand
I bet it bothers you

The nagging instinct
To at least make it look good
It’s you, after all
Who’s gonna sleep on it

Yet you lie down, every night
Until the day, the wrinkles
Become annoying, and 
The filth unbearable

Then comes a Sunday
You open the closet
Only to find out, all of them
Are grey.


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