[2403] Noose around a rose, chapter 21

Since this is chapter 21, you are missing a lot of context but I'll try and summarise. Rose, the main character, killed two men and is struggling with the morality of it all. She and Amelia are friends and Rose is staying over at Amelia's place.

Other names:

Brody: The detective investigating her

Josh: The first victim

Hennessy: The second victim, killed at her flat

my story

My questions:

• Was the chapter descriptive enough?

• Did you feel like the pacing was too quick, or too slow?

• What did you think of the MC? Was she likable? Interesting?

Any and all other comments would be appreciated.

My crits:

[1861] The End of Every-day

[2338] A Cold Day In November (second attempt.)