My dad's first poem in english

Poem

I’m over Rocky Mountains Peak

like an eagle I look at the horizon

awaiting the moment to meet

you to give you all my love

dreaming costs nothing

that's why I fly high above the peaks

so I can scan the universe,

keeping my feet on the ground

I’m one more of the herd

I want to compete, I want to fight

that's the only way to have what I'm looking for

I don't faint, if I fall I get up

I learnt it from the elders

it's the only way, it's the only way

I will find you, I know, I feel it

my eyes see far far away

the day is coming, everything will a be smile

I will dance until exhaustion

and you will lift me from such a beautiful fall

we will fly together, I will no longer be alone,

we will visit the peaks just for pleasure

not worrying about looking for you

for you are by my side

being my shield, I am the spear

we’re invincible, what we hope

we'll make it work, I'm sure of it

we’ll be fine, come on, together we can

when we are old and we will not be able to fly

the ballad of those who fly the hills will be sung

finding their love, together they went on

until the end of time.

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This is my dad first poem in english! He is not a native english speaker. We hope you all enjoy the reading as much as my dad did when writing it!

Posted Jun 7, 2022, 11:49 AM UTC

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