[628] The Fall of Ryan Flarris : A Tale of a Drug Addict's Demise

This is something different from what I've normally written in the past I'm curious for some feedback! Anything that stands out to you or just some main critics would be welcome. Let me know the good, the bad, and the ugly!

story: Story link here

edit: to add a bit more background, this would be the few opening passages to a bigger story of the MC's demise. It's been an idea lingering in my head for a while and I wanted to see whether it appears worth continuing!

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critique: [821] Fuji