[~2,300] It All Ended With a Nightmare

Hey guys! I'm back after whipping up a revised version of my YA paranormal fantasy novel's opening chapter. I took all your wonderful suggestions into consideration and hope this one survives whatever's coming my way haha!

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NY6h3KH79tsT9vHurpKmHM4Unk7rNxpuFa5XykYi3YI/edit?usp=sharing

Sacrifice: [2,494]