[1981] Temple of Redemption - Ch. 2 Part 2

Hi guys!

Here is part 2 of chapter two of my fantasy novel Temple of Redemption. Again, my goal for this chapter is to provide backstory, characterization, and setting while hinting at the danger to our MC and her family.

In the first section, some of you mentioned I needed more backstory and more hints towards the danger they're facing. Let me know if this section clears anything up. I look forward to seeing your crits!