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ramy2019•

Where roads diverged they did not know

As a result of crotch the hearts uttered oh!

These two lines I want to understand but i am having trouble grasping the meaning. The poem begins with a very good question, but I think the following line does not follow exactly the train of thought the first line begun. Now, dont get me wrong I think this could be a very good poem but its meaning escapes me because of that second line. If you could clarify that second line, I think I would be in a much better position to analyze the poem. My best guess is that this poem is related to intimacy? Let me know.

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AeJay2000OP•

The poem is exactly about intimacy. we go on the journey together with till we reach diverging point where we have to be apart the words do not support tongue that is why oh! is uttered by heart.

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