[2585] A Phantom Signal (Part 2)

Hey ever'body,

Any and all critiques are welcome. So, this will make much more sense if you read Part 1. I'll link that thread below.

So, general main things with this one: Is it funny? Is it fun to read?

More specifically: With Brayley, does it come across as if he is losing his mind? What do you think of Dregg’s introduction? And what do you think of Olivia’s introduction?

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For the Readers:

A Phantom Signal Part 2

This is only the thread, you'll find part one there. Not asking for a critique of it, though.

Part 1 Thread

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For the Mods:

[3086] Van Winkle